Reading books really makes me happy because I think it's fun to know other people's wat of thinking through reading books. It's really fun to read other people's creative thinking and unusal stories. Every time when I read books. Especially English books I feel like I am in another world. I cant put the book down and often I feel srange when the author writes special and unusal stories, 'The Hunger Games' series. The author wrote the stories that other people can't think of. This is why like reading! That's the reason why I wrote it in the list of three things.
Making friends is also delightful, but it's also hard for me to make friends. I think I made friends really easily before but these days it's kind of hard. Making friends is easier but making good friends is a bit harder. Anyway, when I make a lot of friends, I feel pleasure and feel like this camp is really awesome! But sometimes, making friends causes troubles, for instance fighting and being jealous because I got to know more and more about other friends.
I think you have a variety of things that you know to be true.^^
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ReplyDeleteHi Ruby:) I really enjoyed your writing. It was very interesting! To make your writing even more interesting, it'd be nice to try to make transition from a paragraph to another smoother by using words like to begin with, furthermore, moreover, last but not least, etc. Trying to write a better intro by creating an intersting hook or writing a conclusion that neatly sums up the body paragraphs would also be very nice. Keep up the good work:)
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DeleteHi, I'm Chanjung Kim, your writing TA. To tell you my impression upon your essay, I think your essay is both very well-written and interesting. Division of 5 paragraphs, usage of diverse vocabulary, and sincere yet light tone of writing all contribute to fine quality of this essay; plus, you don't show many grammatical errors-which makes the essay even more excellent!
ReplyDeleteI want you to keep on writing like this. I hope to read some more.
p.s one thing to point out: Since when I was young, I really liked to buy things. -> Since I was young, I've really liked to buy things
(You don't use Since and When at the same time, and if you use Since, almost always use present perfect tense(have+p.p)
Hi- You did an excellent job writing this post. The presentation is great with spaces between paragraphs and pictures. The conclusion however is too short. Try summarizing in more detail what you have written.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!
wait!! up there, who is that victoria??? who is jiyoung???
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of different personalities Ruby!
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